I'd like people to share there thoughts on creation
Just fishing now but hopefully someone will bite I can't do this alone. I was talking about this blog in class today saying how sad it is that no one participates. but I might have a few more members , True they may be pity members but who knows maybe it will get intresting.
My thoughts on creation...
I'm confused
we are abused
changing the future path does not help us find the roads passed
digging up bones is the closest we've come to true history
Things written are interpretations of event not facts
as they would have us believe
living for one self is selfish but,
living to help everyone is overwhelming
happy mediums exist only with compremising life
In the beginning when ever that was
there was purity and I know you all must be thinking I'm talking about eden
and maybe I am but not in the literal sense
this prue state without things just beings
beauty uncorrupted by man made mania
true there was no toilet paper but....well i have nothing to say but but
life may have come from water, now we live in swams of are own filth
and Jim proclaimed "life's sweetest gift is time", watches like handcuffs link us to this ticking
but there is only night and day the afternoon is over rated
there is only love and hate, fuck like
there is only man an women, transexuals are ashamed of being gay so they changed to fit their sexual perefrence.
beliefs are your soul; and your soul is the closest to God you'll ever be
and LOVE! love is why we truly exist
when we grew legs to walk, we did
we walked to find other people like us..........
So please walk to me, talk to me, share with me!!
My thoughts on creation...
I'm confused
we are abused
changing the future path does not help us find the roads passed
digging up bones is the closest we've come to true history
Things written are interpretations of event not facts
as they would have us believe
living for one self is selfish but,
living to help everyone is overwhelming
happy mediums exist only with compremising life
In the beginning when ever that was
there was purity and I know you all must be thinking I'm talking about eden
and maybe I am but not in the literal sense
this prue state without things just beings
beauty uncorrupted by man made mania
true there was no toilet paper but....well i have nothing to say but but
life may have come from water, now we live in swams of are own filth
and Jim proclaimed "life's sweetest gift is time", watches like handcuffs link us to this ticking
but there is only night and day the afternoon is over rated
there is only love and hate, fuck like
there is only man an women, transexuals are ashamed of being gay so they changed to fit their sexual perefrence.
beliefs are your soul; and your soul is the closest to God you'll ever be
and LOVE! love is why we truly exist
when we grew legs to walk, we did
we walked to find other people like us..........
So please walk to me, talk to me, share with me!!
posted by Mary at 10:17 PM
2 Comments:
I love the line about the watch being a handcuff.
Your view of creation is too literal with the Eden references. Like the point of your blog, you're asking people to participate by creating thoughts and sharing them.
By far, I think that is purest form of creation...
I agree, but i need people to create then, it's getting so bad I'm joining a poetry club at school called hyphen, which creates a book a year with art and poetry it's killing me not to get feed back. blogging has now become an art form addiction. just to read what FAM writes is fun and creative but don't tell them that they may stop doing it, anyway I need more.......More damn it
and of course eden is the literal but its always the starting point for any and all things
plus i really enjoy the visuals i get this way.
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